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历年试题 2011-10-14NA 独立写作

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作者:Xuhui791863 保存时间:01月09日 人气:94
Question:
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order to succeed in a new job, the ability to adapt oneself to the new environment is more important than having profound knowledge about this job.
托福考试时间:2011-10-14,2012-09-23
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disagree.
1.adapt oneself to new environment is the key to succeed in a new job, but that's not mean this ability is more important than having profound knowledge about this job. The two way are both important. e.g.The civil service exam of my country not only need excellent interview grades but also perfect written grades.
2.All jobs required us to have profound knowledge about this job.this is the basement. In the modern society, we are independent people so we can only rely on ourselves. e.g. My father's company has a regulation that every employee should be concentrate on their own thing and they can not be bothered each other. If we have no profound knowledge about our job, we may not solve the problem that we encounter in the work time.
3.Our technology is getting more and more strong. Succeed not a simple thing. Profound knowledge help us get a stable work, adapt to the new environment push us into the better condition to finish out work.eg. When people want to attain some achievement in their job, the ability to adapt oneself to the new environment will leave a good impression on our leadership, profound knowledge about this job made us more efficient.
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