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Question:
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? To improve health, which of the following aspect in life would you like to make a change: 1. Kinds of food to eat 2. The amount of exercise 3. The amount of stress
托福考试时间:2015-12-20
所属分类: Health
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Food 1.eat more healthy food.Eat outside,connvient.add the risk of eating unhealthy food.
2.if we exercise but do not consider of eating habit,the achievement of exercising will be highly decreased
3.eating full and healthy will reduce people's stress.people who has eating full will have enough energy for them to play.However,if a person id very weak without a good eating habit,she just want ti sleep all day or stay on bed which will increase her stress.
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