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Do you agree or disagree with the statement? All university students should be required to take history courses no matter what field they study in.
托福考试时间:2009-06-13,2013-09-29,2015-05-09
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观点句改写:In order to improve the holistic education in universities, a related proposal has been raised that universities should require all students to take history courses no matter what field they are in. In my opinion, this idea is not practicable in the real situations.

理由:
1.让步段:Admittedly, in theory, studying history courses can be beneficial to all college students no matter what major they are specializing in. Since history is a mirror of the reality that could allow us to get a better understanding of the real world we are in. However, in reality, it is not desirable to require all students to take these courses.
2.Requiring all university students to enroll in history courses can adversely impact their overall learning efficiency.
3.It could a waste of time for those students who will pursue a career after graduation that has nothing to do with history.

总结:In conclusion, I do not agree that all college students should be required to take a history course. Although studying history may give students a better understanding of the reality they are facing. In reality, requiring all students to take history courses could have negative effects on their overall studying efficiency and it can be a big waste of time for the students who will take on a career that has little to do with history whatsoever.
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