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作者:dashenyyc 保存时间:2015-09-08 人气:152
Question:
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? University education is the most important factor of success in life.
托福考试时间:2008-06-29
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as for me, to be success means we can have a good performance on our work and feel satisfied about ourselves, thus I definately hold the belief that the university deucation is not the most significant factor of success in life.

In the first place, people can achieve their own success even if they do not attend or drop out of the college.

Furthermore, there are many other important factors can contribute to our success.

Lastly, even if some people receive a good education in the universities, they may unable to be successful after they graduated.
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s for me, to be success means we can have a good performance on our work and feel satisfied about ourselves, thus I definately definitely hold the belief that the university deucation is not the most significant factor of success in our life. 


In the first place, people can achieve their own success even if they do not did not attend or drop out of the college.


Furthermore, there are many other important factors can contribute to our success.


Lastly, even if some people receive a good education in the universities, they may unable to be successful after they graduated.


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