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历年试题 2008-06-29CN 独立写作

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作者:大神霸中霸 保存时间:2015-09-08 人气:111
Question:
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? University education is the most important factor of success in life.
托福考试时间:2008-06-29
所属分类: 个人成功
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Admittedly, university education play a crucial role on success in life. However, I disagree that college education is the most important factor because the statement is too absolute. Other factors such as individual's personalities,abilities and their opportunities brought by social environment are of equal importance.

To start with,individual factors like their personalities and abilities determine whether they can accommodate their living and job environment, hence their possibility to success. It is obvious that not all of these qualities are from university education.

Second, even if a person has a charming personality and is extremely competent in his job, he can't success without opportunities. Moreover, these opportunities do not come from university education but from the social environment.

To sum up, we can hardly deny the pivotal role of college education on success. Nevertheless, it can never be the only and most important factor.

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这个statement太过于绝对化。诚然大学教育对个人成功很重要,但是是否是最重要的呢?我不认为。比如说,个人的个性和能力(并不全部由于上大学培养而来),和社会环境带来的机遇都能影响人的成功。我认为这些在重要上性上不分伯仲。

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